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Sprinkle To Rain(Gift for Jade)

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First of all happy birthday Jade!!!may you have more!!
ok..so I made this drawing For Jade A friend of mine(see her deviants [link] :D) as a birthday present(which is a bit pass, but oh well...) so I hop you like it!!

this is a combination of a persenal comment she gave me about a song calld Sprinkle To Rain and one of her Deviantarts! ([link]) in which I see a person jumping(another friend saw a wolf?!!) and thought that it whold be realy cool to make it seem like it's me jumping into her would of emotions and amazing feeling!!!

hope for you the best Jade!! happy birthday!!!
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Sorry for taking forever to respond to this. I was taking a few day break from dA again. But I'm back. Alright I'll try to critique this. I don't typically do that, but I will try my best.

Besides the background, the first thing I noticed was the legs. The legs turned out pretty good, I really like that it begins to disappear when they begin to go higher up on the body, until it is just simply an outline of the torso. I really like how you did that.
The bottom of the pants could be a little more flared. I only say this because I keep mistaking the pants for socks. But the bottom of the pants can vary depending on what type of pants you are drawing. It's not that big of a deal, but I felt like pointing it out for you.
Now for the shoes, that is a bit harder for me to critique cause I'm not good at feet at all. But something about the shape seems a bit off. Example one of the shoes have a bit of a curve while the other one seems to do a hill like curve.
The effect of the body, arms and head is a really good effect. It's like electricity, it make me feel energized when I look at it. It's like showing the energy inside this person, and I enjoy that feeling when I look at it.
Finally I absolutely love the background, the dark background and the lighter effects contrast nicely with each other making the background wonderful to look at. The background also goes well with the electric like body.
So in general I like this picture. I like to be able to look at it, it is very appealing to the eye.